edits

read through chapter 1 with it’s line edits, added some atmospheric stuff, tightened some more stuff up, added another layer of possible future plot to my notes.

fleshed out the extra scene I started for the prologue, it’s still off-flow but it will get there, I need to not look at it for awhile and let it breathe a bit.

going to start doing line edits for chapter 2 tonight.